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Lucinda~ I grabbed Jessica before he could take off with her. I scratched his hand away. "Go inside" I told her. She needed to keep the baby or babies safe. ...

Lucinda~ I stared back at Jessica. "There has to be another way. You can't just be expected to die. Espesically after you have childeren." She just shook her head. "It's ...

** Sounds fun. ** Name: Rosalie Adams Apperance: Has mid-back black hair with platinum underneath, thick side swept bangs that covers the left eye. Her eyes are a golden brown ...

Well, I like the plot but this is too short to be a chapter. Now if this is only part of chapter one it's okay but I did find a ...

Arabella~ "Oh Leon, please calm down. I met him like ten minutes before you found me." I put a han on his trembling hand and it stopped a little. I ...

Lucinda~ I watched as Jessica ran a hand through her hair and sighed. I held out my hand to her. "Come on Jesscia, let's get you cleaned up." She took ...

Arabella~ I sighed and set my glass down. "That was Teal. I had just met the guy and we were going to the bar." He nodded after I was done ...

Lucinda~ I looked up at the queen, she looked amused. Edward looked impassive standing beside me. He didn't looked afraid at all. I had been worried since I found out ...

Arabella~ I sighed. "I ran because I was scared." I admited, looking at the floor. I couldn't look at him while I was being vulnerable. "You could've found me though. ...

Arabella~ I handed him the glass. I sat beside him and glared again. "What?" He asked again. "I told you. If you were alive all that time why didn't you ...

Hey! And welcome to YWS. I'm Rachael but you can call me anything you like. I wasn't very good when I stared YWS either but the critiques help a lot! ...

Lucinda~ I snarled a Jared's words. I had never taken his clan; it had been forced upon me when he suposedly died. Tobi was still in shock about Jessica. I ...

Lucinda~ The girl told me her name was LB and shook my hand. She seemed very nice but annoyed. I wondered why I was the only one who seemed to ...

Lucinda~ "Put her down Jared! Can't you see your freaking her out?" Jared stopped abruptly and looked back. He scoffed when he saw me. "So your the new leader of ...

I liked the detail you put into this but it's a bit short. Maybe add something to the beginning. If this is just a short story then I like the ...