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Re: The Chinise Vampire Clan vs Vampire Europian society
Adeline~ I sighed. It had been so boring lately! Where had the action gone? I walked over to the cemetery to sit and think. I had my violin with me, ...
Wed May 21, 2008 11:40 pm -
Re: A Clean Bite--Chapter 1 part 1 [rewrite]
1. WELCOME I didn’t know this girl that was staring back at me. She had all my features. She had the long, inky black hair; the grayish-blue eyes and fair ...
Wed May 21, 2008 11:26 pm -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Rosalie~ As he bit my lip I pulled away slowly and bent my head to his neck. He sighed in pleasure and pulled me closer. I pulled my head up ...
Wed May 21, 2008 11:20 pm -
Re: The Ultimate Storybook DT
In the third storybook are they going to be leaving soon? I was just wondering.
Wed May 21, 2008 11:04 pm -
Re: Big Shot Screaming: part one (revised)
This was a good start. It pulled me in. The only mistake that kind of made me reread it was this one: No one would have guessed it’d be us, ...
Wed May 21, 2008 11:01 pm -
Re: You're on in Five
Well now that everyone's already gotten the nit-picking over with I get to tell you how much I liked it. :D This was a very good introduction to the main ...
Wed May 21, 2008 10:45 pm -
Re: Why didyou seem to slip away like a rope unheld in my hands?
Okay, hi again. This was good but I saw a couple of things that didn't make sense. Even I couldn't see it at the start either, That sentence doesn't sound ...
Wed May 21, 2008 10:25 pm -
Re: Teenagers - Discussion Thread
Um, I'm totally lost. Someone bring me in?
Wed May 21, 2008 10:11 pm -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Emmet~ I was surprised by her kiss but I didn't resist. I gently touched her tongue with mine and wrapped my arms around her small, slender waist. Her fingers grabbed ...
Wed May 21, 2008 9:51 pm -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Rosalie~ "You're pretty amazing yourself," I smiled and bent my head to kiss him. My fingers traced the his abs. I put my head down on his chest and listened ...
Wed May 21, 2008 8:16 pm -
Re: Teenagers
**Um, someone help? I left a group and now I'm no where to be seen. :( **
Wed May 21, 2008 8:09 pm -
Re: Not drunk anymore are you?
Hey! Welcome to YWS. This was a sad thing to write about, but I don't know... It just seems more personal. Which don't get me wrong, I like personal pomes, ...
Wed May 21, 2008 12:23 am -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Rosalie~ I was confused when he pushed my hands but he was kissing me so passionetly I couldn't think. I put my hands behind his head and kissed him back. ...
Tue May 20, 2008 11:56 pm -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Rosalie~ I gasped as he slipped my bra off. As he kissed my neck my hands found his belt. I unbuckled it slowly. My lips were at his ear, brushing ...
Tue May 20, 2008 11:32 pm -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Rosalie~ I felt his fingers lightly moving my shirt up. I helped him out a bit. I pulled the other side of my aqua tank off to reavel my sliky ...
Tue May 20, 2008 10:45 pm
