Vampirewolf3

erm...thanks for all the comments ill work on it

I can just imagine someone saying that after coming back from a danger zone. XD

The tag read: Pixie Chief of of Development Section Two Yeah. I agree with Pixie: Chief of of Development does sound awkward. Other than that, I liked it.

The Storm Mage The Dust in the Wind Strange Talents The Infernal's Hate .::The Storm Mage::. The shepherd climbed up the jagged peaks of Havoc Mountain located in the mountains ...

Its almost like there is a cloak of assure is keeping her from her own agony. The "its" need an apostrophe. She stops to breathe and thunder sounds in the ...

terrible bloodthirsty deeds. I would add a comma between terrible and bloodthirsty. Also, the story is somewhat confusing at the beginning with different terms. It was not until the end ...