Vampiress

Sophie reached her hand up to the tall shelf, seeing the red cookie jar that she desperately wanted to reach, but her mother made sure she had no access to ...

Yes. I overuse some words and would like to 'shake' things up by using a thesaurus.

It helped me alot, your so helpful. Thank you, Mackenzie

Thank you SO much! :D

I have writers block alot, but recently I came up with a great story idea. So, I am currently writing it, *sigh* still.

Ok, thank you. I didn't know they had different spelling. So, practicing is right for me, got it. Thanks again! ~Mackenzie

I have a question if you don't mind. Do we send the whole 'book' or just like the first 50 pages\3 chapters? Or a summary for beginning,middle, and ending? Or ...

Isn't practicing spelt that way not practising??

Sorry, When I am online I don't pay attention. At school, writing, ect I care. I really think I have a chance ( if I edited it). I am planning ...

Whoa, calm down. If you want reviews, the best thing to do is to review other people. You'll get noticed a LOT easier. :P Anyway... there are a lot of ...

Please don't just read and don't leave comments. I'd like some advice! :elephant:

Thanks. I don't care how old I am I just want my book published. I want to make a change for someone, open a path for them to give reading ...

I do.

Do you guys like it?? :elephant:

I want to published fantasy book that I have been working on. Part of it is posted here.. Does anyone have any suggestions on how to get it published, or ...