Vampiress

Very good artist!

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It's your own work nobody know the story line as well as you. Try coming up with many ideas and see how they flow with the other parts. The one ...

Very good. I'm not the best at picking out errors, so I hope the rest are. Sorry, and I just have a bit of advice.... Lexine makes me think of ...

Early morning signaled the sky, the bands of orange light rising into the blue, like a sunset in reverse. Not a car was on the road on the New York ...

Lexine. Never a good place to start, out of order, not to fit in. This sentence makes me wonder, Is it a person or place? You don't want your reader ...

I'll give suggestions after I read the other parts because I don't like skipping. SO,brb!

Thanks, I'll work on chapter 2. You hellped me so much. :D

Well, Warriors is in the childrren's section at Borders and I don't read Children's book because they are way to easy. I was targeting for ages 12+. I've read warriors.

What's a good publisher for a Wolf Fantasy novel?

Me with out you is like Black with no White Night with out a following day April with out May Hot with out cold You and me are opposites With ...

I'm not allowed to post pictures of myself.

It sounds like a book about someone who causes fear or has a fear of something that happends everyday. ____________________ Hunters (book 1): Purity

(how do you do this??)

Thanks anyway.