Vampiress

I'd also like to say Azami, having her fear? If you read the whole thing, it's not a fear but her brother Kage dies, which changes her up.

Hero here! Now, to review. Note if you cannot handle blood, you shouldn't read this. "read alittle and review what you read, you don't have to do it all at ...

hi! i am here to comment on your story, as you may all ready know! first off, i love wolves (my fav animal) so i love them in here lol. ...

Note if you cannot handle blood, you shouldn't read this. Preface The pale moonlight shone through the branches of the dark brown trees, glowing onto the wolves’ fur. It wasn't ...

i AM WRITING A NOVEL. K? Well, it's 36,000 short of words. Any tips on making it longer making things more descriptive???

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Thank you so much. Nice dancing elephant. Yes, i know everyone thinks character talking to the audience was stupid. I don't think so. Thanks alot Mage_banks. Thanks for commenting on ...

Ok, thank you.

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Well, E means a little kid could read it without getting scared, lots of blood, scared about war. But yes, so far I agree it's E. Good story!! I like ...

I posted chapter 2.

Forgotten, Once again... excellent piece of work you've written. Basically the same things I had pointed out before, still the name Lexine I picture a girl, when I know it's ...

Forgotten, Nothing wrong with the end,keep it. Please do. It's just and odd way to end of a story\chapter, in my opinion. It's just my opinion, if you like, keep ...

In my opinion, I see emo as EMOtional. Not cutting yourself.....