Vampiress

Hey. You have good writing skills, but no offense or anything, this sounds almost exactly like twilight. There are so many parallels. The MC is pale skinned and so is ...

Your new mod name(it can be the same as your user name if you want): Vampiress Male of Female: Female Already mod-ified or in the process: nope

Thanks Mods.

Anyone

Everything.

Okay, maybe I made a mistake there but still. Who is Okami? You don't know...... then you really didn't read it.

even though mother's day isn't untill MAY 9th (my b-day), i wanna write her a heart felt poem. Help

Purity comes in later in the book, don't worry. :)

Hero here! Now, to review. Note if you cannot handle blood, you shouldn't read this. "read alittle and review what you read, you don't have to do it all at ...

Wow, long. :thud:

Thank you for the review, I apprecaite it. I cannot review yours at the moment, but I will. Welcome-ish to YWS. ;)

Bailey nervously, looked at the plug jack on the wall, followed the cord down to the hair straighter, that she was obviously afraid of. Mackenzie sat on the chair.

Maybe explain why valentines day was the worst for him. Questions: Why did he sleep on the bench?

Erin swallowed her tears. Mm, little short. What about : Erin swalled her tears that ran down her face like raindrops. >.> I don't know, but it sounds better like ...

ok, I change the heal thing!