VampireSenshi

haha I can't believe I wrote that. Rayah sounding like a mom :D

Rayah comes back downstairs with Jace's jacket. I take it, and put it next to the clothes I brought down. Kei tells us his story, Rayah's eyes are getting red. ...

"You stay here okay?" I say, "Okay," he replies in a small voice. I flash up to my room and get some clothes. And bring them to Kei. "These were ...

I move a bit closer to Kei, he backs away. "It's ok buddy, I won't hurt you." I say gently. I touch him on the shoulder. He's shivering to bits. ...

Where would ECH be in the novel do you think? Like Chapter eight or nine?

"Yeah I saw there was a ruckus. Dragons, that's insane. And be careful on that couch, it's dangerous." I warn. I turn to little Kei. "How did you get here ...

Agreed

Rayah pinches my side, "I was talking with Aaron next door, then she went to bed and I flashed over here. And then I heard Jace go for the mail. ...

Yeah, maybe we can split them up into sub-chapters. Like Chapter One - Sub-Chapter One - The Meeting It would be really fun to write

WOOH!

I look down at the boy, crouching down to his level I say, "What's you're name little guy?"

I think what we should do is take the parts we know are first, and then upload them on YWS as Chapters. And the names can be the places that ...

And here comes andrew!

Andrew- I walk down the stairs after I hear Jace go for the mail. "Did my netflix thing get here Jace?" I ask at the top of the stairs, I ...

I will justify the whole story into third person for the first time. But then we could try and write it all again in separate perspectives. It's all just a ...