VampireBloodrace

This one is my favorite (no wonder I put it before the other two). I was inspired by an anime pic and I hope you like it! “You can’t go!” ...

Oooooh! That's cool! Hmmm...lets see 1) I agree with springrain, you have quite a talent! Lol 2) The stem and the leaves sprouting from the stem look a little weird ...

Wow! Thats some amazing looking architecture! I'm not much of a photography critiquer, but I'm impressed at how well you capture each monument/building. Very, very pretty! :D

I reached the second to last step, my heart throbbing with desperate desire. Freedom, my freedom, was beyond this black iron gate – I wasn’t going to give up. The ...

Awww, that's cute. It's nose is a little to long though - that bugs me :) It's well done for a quick drawing on the computer

Lol, that's rather funny. I like how you drew the dragon. It really looks evil and aggressive. The princess looks.....kinda......weird. She doesn't give the impression of "AAAAAAH! DON'T EAT ME!" ...

Lol, call me crazy, but I like how Rayne came out better! I like the smudging on the tail and her expression. Tyranny's eyes look kinda weird...and is she laughing? ...

Well, as usual, I think your drawings are really good! I like how you drew the Hellfire behind them (even though they aren't in your Hellite story). Rayne's left paw ...

Ooooh! :) I LOVE the colors! Very bright and bold! It reinds me of a Chinese/Japanese style. I like ti very much!

He's so funny! But, in a good way :D

Well, it would probably look better if it was smaller. It would also help with the overall feel of the image. Anyway, I love the bird! It's very pretty. Hard ...

1. I love how you got that angle of the branch! Or is it a tree? Lol 2. I like how you portrayed the bird as your focal point. The ...

Yeah, this isn't the only of my works which that has happened to. It seems to be rather popular here :)

Thanks, Swottielottie, your critique definitely helped. I'll see what I can do about the dialogue....because they are supposed to be somewhat the same, but if it gets so confusing that ...

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