Vamp_Dollie

Wow I just realized how terrible this is, Sorry for posting it.

My Shame I'm innocent while asleep fears can't ever stir me until I awake then my demons come to claim thier stake Personal vices call out to me embrace me, ...

Um, excuse me but it's not through the topic of an emo. It's actually through the perspective of someone who has histrionic personality disorder (the attention seeking disorder). I appreciate ...

I'll raise my glass to that, vampires really shouldn't sparkle.

Wow thanks guys for being so nice, I feel very welcome. Yes anyone can call me Sam. I'm glad there are so many fellow vampire lovers out there.

This is just an introduction to a short story, i'm not sure where to take it... "So what made you stop?" Dr. Davidson was bored. He was used to this ...

It was meant to be short, and acoustic. I wanted each line to be sung indvidually, a lot of great songs clock in under two minutes though.

Oh and music? I can go on for days about that. Honestly don't get me started.

Yeah I'm a bit of a vampire fan, Dracula has been my morning commute buddy for a while though. but my username comes from my band's name "The Vamp Dollies". ...

First of all, I hate you. Just kidding but you have an incredible gift for song writing that fills me with envy, that was beautiful. Your use of words fills ...

This is a great heavy metal song because I can imagine it. It's raw and intense, I can imagine where every guitar and drum solo would fit in. I love ...

I think it's very nice. I just don't see a lot of personality behind it, I don't see a lot of emotion. Anyone could have written this. Maybe you should ...

It seems heartfelt, I like that. I can tell it's about someone real or a real experience.

I think you should expand it. It seems like you're trying and I hate reading things like that. The words should flow naturally as if thier coming straight from your ...

I like the morbidity. It's not overly done so it's good. I liked the bit of internal struggle in the verses, you should expand on it.