VampX13

I really like it. It's quite a witty title actually because you think it's going to be all Sirius/Remus or Sirius/James. And then it's just a completely different story. I ...

I liked it. It held a certain depth without straying from some relation to the reader. The words you used are common (and I mean "common" in a good way) ...

Very strong imagery. My one complaint is about these two lines: "worry not, sand is more precious than stars." They sounded kind of choppy like that. Maybe if you added ...