VampX13

Before reading: Please, do not be too harsh in critiquing the stange words used and the odd plot. This is intended to be nonsensical to a point and it does ...

Very nice. For some reason it makes me think of a sort of Modern French style. (Hmm... that is very curious...) Very nice.

Indeed, you are one! :) I'm a walking oxymoron! Do have a favourite Nothern European civilization? I do know a bit about Nothern European's but not as much as I ...

Thank you for the advice. I will actually be revising some othe mistakes here. Repitition, I now see, is a problem in this introduction. I'll try to lessen my use ...

Greetings to you, Bjorn, Monsieur Walking-Oxymoron. (Yay!) I am Vamp, VampX13, and also a great history buff -- very much into Egyptians, Greeks and Minoans. (I'm all classic bebe.)

The pleasure is all mine, Sayani. Thank you for the warm welcome.

Well the plot seems like it's in an interesting one. It got my attention. However I think you could establish the setting a bit more. Take some time to describe ...

Note to all readers! I'm looking for a better title to this story. If you have any suggestion let me know. If you would like to know anything about the ...

Yeah, I can see how that would be confusing. Thanks for that correction. Erp - this might take some crazy revising... *Runs off to revise, like a good little Amanda.*

The last part of the poem was something I added as a thought-provoker. I added it a while after I'd finished this poem. Oh and get ready for my head ...

I like the idea. And I think your inspiration seems true but perhaps you should let it flow more. I'm not going to get technical because I'm just not good ...

Note to all readers and critics! This poem is broken into the three parts. I rearranged the parts to place it in the way I wanted it to be read ...

That was very sweet and really did describe Oscar Wilde. And, even though it was primarily ryhming, the poem had a rythm. I love rythmic poetry. I don't think there's ...

Thanks. Feel free to critic a bit too though. After all I would not want my head to swell up too much from compliments.

Thanks. And I do agree I sometimes end up mixing up plots and sometimes even characters when it comes to multi-story writing.