Valteria

The fastest way home on foot from the bodega on Union Ave. was to cut across the next street on your left, go two miles up Lincoln, and jaywalk to ...

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The perfect character in a novel is the character who is not at all perfect. What I mean is that you shouldn't strive to have perfect characters in your story. ...

This wasn't an actual story. It seemed more like a note that someone would write to his/her ex than a piece that could get published. You have potential definitely. I ...

Scary, yes, but overall, I thought this was poorly written. It was depressing yet altogether dumb at the same time. So you didn't give the readers enough background on David ...

This is a lovely poem. I like the rhyme scheme. Your grandmother must have been an amazing woman because this poem is truly is both happy and sad simultaneously. Happy ...

The name is Milen. Would you pronounce it as (myl-en) or (mil-en) or neither? I am curious because this is the name of the main character of the novel I ...

Well........... I am going to make the assumption that this piece is meant to be ambiguous. Right? Anyhow, it was quite an enjoyable read. Let me guess. He is not ...

Good.............................but not great. What this is missing is less tell and more show. Right now, the older brother seems like a spoiled brat. I'm not understanding him. There's no good ...

I am not fascinated by the shallow, cliche novels I often encounter in the Young Adult section of the bookstore. The whole boyfriend-themed, fashionista, drama queen, high school is a ...

OH. MY. GOODNESS. I love this! The beauty of poetry lies in its inherent nature, its ability to spark varying emotions and thoughts into different individuals. Guess what I got ...