Valteria

Hi. Valteria here to give you your second review. Here goes: That was a well-written article in my opinion. It's so cool that you got it published on CNN.com- congrats! ...

Father spoke of a world where graveyards are unheard of because little girls become dandelions sprouting in the lush meadows beyond the horizon of a Kentucky farmhouse as they fall ...

Insomnia is an interesting topic to write about, but in order to build a complete story around it, there has to be more to the piece than insomnia. You said ...

If I could find that same brass skeleton key engraved with my initials because you used it on an autumn Sunday, arctic breeze biting the cheek of the girl aside ...

A twenty landed on the pile of bills before me. At my right, Daniel Aulone pushed his palms against the rim of the table and leaned back in his chair. ...

Hi. Let's see. I am not going to discuss grammatical errors. Just know that you have a lot of missing words and awkward sentences and phrases here and there. My ...

A twenty landed on the pile of bills before me. At my right, Daniel Aulone pushed his palms against the rim of the table and leaned back in his chair. ...

As if it were some warm, summer afternoon, golden sun rays enhancing his eyes, reflected on his beloved’s face. He could not see her cry, could not see those sapphires ...

Good job. I like everything: the descriptions, the characters, the atmosphere of the story. I strongly recommend you change the ending, though. Maybe instead of saying that Adam killed someone, ...

I have to be honest with you. I didn't read past the first sentence of the fifth paragraph because I was bored out of my head.You simply bragged and listed ...

This piece was nice and cute, although there was not a single element in it that I can honestly say I have not read elsewhere. You are a good writer, ...

Amen to Viviel's review. This is, by far, the best work I have read on this site. Not only is your idea original, but it is also well-written. I am ...

Hello! :) *raises hand, yelling "Pick me! I have a request! Pick me!" I understand that you are hungry, so here I am, prepared to feed you! Could you review ...

What we take for granted is more than you'd believe Often what we take for granted is everything we need He took his dearest love for granted every single day ...

Interesting. :D To start with, I believe that this story has some potential. You should continue on to writing Chapter 2. The title is strong. It leaves me in suspense ...