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Here I am at last1 Sorry it took so long... I must say, I really like this. :D Good job! The plot was original, and was the point of view. ...

Here as requested. Sorry it took so long. I forgot about my wrff after nobody posted in it for like two weeks. I don't have to much to critique after ...

Okay people. Everybody thinks this is starting to drag. I really tried to make it exciting and stuff, but ir didn't work I guess. So, What can I do that ...

Hello Hippie. I am here at your service. So glad that I could help review this and I hope this helps some. Please remember that everything I say is advice, ...

Hmmm....I wasn't necessarily going to have the marks be what you said...but it maybe be a good idea. Yes, the villains haven't really showed up yet. They will, both the ...

thanks for the comments. Hippie: the girl has had crimson eyes half the time for the entire story. It isn't normal, but its a side effect. ill change the religion ...

Please review my story, Shades of Violet. It's pretty cool. I hope you enjoy it. : Thanks so much!

Please review this story: It is pretty popular and I hope you enjoy it. It is the fourth chapter, but you can read the others in adventure/action fiction if you ...

Salut! Here is chapter four. I hope you guys are as excited about this as I am. So, I wrote this and was so excited that I only edited it ...

Here's my first poem to be submitted here. I wrote it for English. The criteria was to write a poem about death and dying. Hope you guys enjoy and and ...

Hey Natibabes! Here to review your poem. Hope you find this helpful. I wrote of a world, a world where the wind whispers melodies of old A world where treasure, ...

Hey! I loved to get a review on my third chapter of my ongoing novel. Here's the link. Find the previous chapters in action/ adventure fiction. [url]

Yeah. I've been noticing that myself. I guess I didn't want to reveal things too fast. Now, I realize that I'll have to show more. Prepare to me in awe.

Perfect idea. I'll definitely use that.Thanks.

no offense, but all those powers are really boring and cliche. I will use colors for something else. (wink) Keep on thinking.