Valentine

Revised Version. Enjoy and comment: Entry #1 The cars flashed by in mixed blurs. I strained my eyes down the road, desperately. I kept on telling myself that there had ...

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Here as requested: with arts of ink This does not make sense to me that ripe and tear "ripe" should be rip I think. Overall I liked the poem. I ...

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Hmmmmmm. I am not going to add too many comments because the reviewers before gave you sufficient advice. The only thing i have to say is.....uh.....you need to put more ...

This is me and my epicness. Oh yeah!

Name: Glatorix Age: 150 years (young) Species: Dragon Gender: Male Rank: none Personality: Glatorix was the son of the dragon King, but when he declared war on the gryphons/pegasuses, he ...

---- Your bloody Valentine is here for a review !---- Okay, I am going to try to make this as awesome as possible, but bare with me. First off let ...

Hey Firestarter! Here is the link to a chapter in a novel I am writing: So basically it's about these teenagers (sorry, I know you don't like stories with them) ...

Mission Accomplished

Hey, it's your bloody Valentine , here for a review. I am actually really mad because I got really far into this review, and then somebody clicked out of it ...

all done.

Can you please review this?

Okay, let's do this. Here is the link to the sixth chapter in a novel I am writing. It will probably be confusing to you, but if you want to ...

Well, hey everybody, it's Val . This chapter has been long in the coming. Sorry for kind of ditching you guys for a while. Well, here it is, the sixth ...