Valentine

It's my pen name. (don't tell anybody)

Valentine Hello readers, this is my first post on this site. I hope you enjoy it. Here's is some background on the story. The idea came to me when I ...

As the wet ground crumbles beneath his feet He carries a container of food For his dear friend. His mind is stuck on Santiago's helplessness, Anything but hopelessness. The two ...

Valentine My full name is Theon Valentine, which means "uncageable love" Valentine

Valentine The thing I like most about this poem is that it doesn't take the view of most romantic writing, and talk about bliss and perfect love. This is accurate ...

Valentine I am sad to say that I have no idea what this means. It was written well, flowed, and rhymed, what is was very confusing. There is a line ...

Valentine Hmmmm...this made me think. It all happened very fast, from the scenery, to her past, to her future, to the death. I like they style I guess. The one ...

Valentine This poem captures the way of the world very well. The world is dark, and full of this immorality. This is the best poem I've read so far because ...

Valentine Nice name. The whole poem seems pretty creepy. I fell like I've heard the somewhere, maybe it's the cliche of the dead corpse bride. The one thing I don't ...

Valentine Since this in non-fiction, I assume this is true about you. I am puzzled as to why you put his on, showing your true inner self to complete strangers ...

Valentine This dream seems to be a nightmare. The writing was as simple as could be. Not very much description at all, but it caught the perspective perfectly of a ...

Valentine It seems to me that you are not very familiar with swords. You poem suggests that one can "cleave" somebody with a "thrust." That is not possible. Besides that, ...

Valentine This leaves me thinking quietly. I wonder why this in historical fiction. This is much more real than fiction. I confused as to why you wrote this. Was it ...

Valentine To Jasmine: I am a guy, Valentine being my last name. I am confused on why you're so shocked. To Elinor: I was just trying to be funny to ...

Valentine The one think I think people mistake about poetry is the rules. They think things have to be specifically written certain ways. No, that's wrong. Unless you're trying to ...