Valentine

Hey, if you could review this: that would be sick. Its called the other side of the glass. THis is just part one but its only going to be a ...

Be sweet if you'd review this: Its called the other side of the glass. This is just part one but its just a short story.

Thanks so much you two for the awesome reviews! I tried to correct everything you said and have updated the version above. Thanks alot!

greetings. I would love if you could review this: Thanks so much! Message me if you want a review in return!

Hey artsy! I think I will be the first one to request a review from you! yay. Here's the link: This is an adventure/fantasy story. So far this is the ...

Thanks vkshravi for the feedback! I'm so glad you liked it and it and I'm giddy with your such high praise. With the paragraph spacing- everything was split into paragraphs ...

Haha, I totally agree. Being rebellious has a way of making things more fun! Hey, I am so glad you enjoyed this! I'll make sure to correct those things and ...

Hello. I am Valentine . This is something I have been thinking about lately. A world where music is illegal, and it takes you to a different world. Please comment ...

to Issac: Yea man, you are totally right with your comment. There is always light and dark in your mind. Often more dark, that's why it's so hard to do ...

Hey thank! I am glad you like it!

In My Mind There’s a raging river in my mind Where I go to drown my every fear The current foams with teeth like death A notion that lies lifeless ...

Hey Skins, it would be great if you could review this: It would be great if you could focus on the style, the characters, and overall impact. Thanks a lot!

Thanks! I got worried when somebody voted that the style wasn't interesting.

a forgotten song Jump. The man motions to the cliff. I shake my head. It is too far. I will die. I know. You want me to die? It won’t ...

To a girl who has "A Fallen Angel" below her name. I imagine this story will be perfect for you, haha. I am glad you liked it.