Vaishnavi

Hi, I thought there were many grammatical errors and spelling errors.Also it doesn't really seem to fit in as poetry, more as prose or perhaps a short verse story.Oh, and ...

Hey, I quite liked your poem, but maybe you could put it into stanzas rather than lines of two. I loved your use of metaphors and strong phrases. The rhymes ...

Hi, I like the poem...its quite nice. Vaishnavi