Utopia

Utopia Paradise here, The story-line was good but I think you wrote it a little too fast because there was a lot of mistakes. Most of them are mentioned below ...

Utopia here, your dreamy sister. Nicely done! Just remember, if you want this book to be for children or a youngish age group, then don't use very complicated language. Like ...

Utopia here. Once you start reading this, you can't stop! Your description's are amazing, I really felt like I was the character. The story was short yet so satisfying that ...

Hey big sis! Utopia Paradise here for another review! It was a good follow up. Is it over now? I really liked Ben's character, he is so mysterious and unknown. ...

Hey, Utopia Paradise here with another awesome review! I really liked the first part of your story, it was really realistic when Maria was forgetting the lyrics. It was a ...

Hi, this is Utopia here to review you! This story is very different to what you usually write, but I think it is an improvement. There is more description in ...