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Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
Doing great for your first. :)
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
Bonus Track. A bit dumb. Distilled Poem #1 I was a poet once, and I said "I loved you seasonally But you left me first in epitaphs And now you ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
6. Forms Convention, in a mode, bohemian, skinned from the ephemera like a candidate for stew. I discern still life from the still born, a moonshine concocted for those poise- ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
I wanted to call this one "Listomania". I wanted to. But I stopped myself. Also, I don't know how to be brief. Quietly took to the dark of the day ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Hide yo kids, hide yo wife (mustard NaPo)
I tried an epic in the same format once. It was like 8000 words but a big waste of space and very unreadable. This looks great, though.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: I might be wrong: Kylan's NaPo
Your word choice is just golden. I like everything here. Your lines just have a lot of personality. Will leave something before the end of the month in the form ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
4. Curbed Brought into this world in a coldwarm bed with whites in my eyes, a railroad for a spine; and the world smelled of pine. Brought into this world, ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
3. Love Song A corduroy pocket, the trenches in which red lines are dragged, you say, and it becomes the truth. A trickle, captured from the vitreous, tangled in gravity, ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
I really like these. Expect something from me before the end of the month.
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
Oh, hello! Thank you. Enjambment is like my number one enemy. It's a challenge I have to face every day. And wonderful, I'll be sure to pop into your projects ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
Table of Contents a love like ours is neolithic: the interplay of dreams, realities, plans and all the novel things about the most ancient of games by Uraziel (c) 2011 ...
Apr 2, 2011
