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Re: The Inquistive Heart (a few dialogues from it)
Sorry these are merely snippets of the main couple, Vascom and Adrianna, I've written the rest of the script but if you like this then I'll post the rest. It ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: The Last Art
hey there wow this is a very intellectual poem, well-written and it shows it took a lot of thought. It is very amazing and your expansive vocabularly really makes it ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: The Last Art
hey there wow this is a very intellectual poem, well-written and it shows it took a lot of thought. It is very amazing and your expansive vocabularly really makes it ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Sunset Sand
hello there, I am in awe. You are such a gifted writer, your descriptions of the surroundings are so artistically intellectual. I can picture everything and your grammar is flawless. ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: HaRm YoU :(
I've never been hurt this bad Been this let down this low, I've never felt such pain and thought things so immoral I feel like a criminal because of what ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: deleted
hey there I loved your piece but there were a few errors that I think you should revise. So let me just give you my two cents and hopefully I'll ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Flower
the more of your work I see the better it seems to get. You are really talented. This is a beautiful poem, quite gripping and very creative a combo with ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: What I See Behind the Masquerade (Intro)
hey there I'm confused a bit here. there are no grammatical mistakes but I'm confused because is it you talking or your character? i know sometimes both are one but ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Heartbleed clouds to save me
hey there, wow the title is beautiful. so Bravo there. The poem is well-written, very creative so Bravo there because that is artistry at its best. I really loved your ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: That Night
thank you very much for the encouragement.xx Upile xx
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Daisy McKnight- My Name In Print
(This is only a snipet from Daisy McKnight- My Name In Print so bare with me.xx) “All de things I love and live by are in that box. My little ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Him *10*
hey there read it. it is nice and has the potential of being better if you just polish it up a bit and fix a few things i noticed. here ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: That Night
thank u very much!
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Sappy Love Poem
I love this poem, not too long and not too short and very true. Anyone who has been in love can relate to the love hate situation. Its described perfectly ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Mary In The Rain
wow your comment really made my day. i just wrote that poem an hour ago in ten minutes so there is a lot of improving to do but as soon ...
Feb 19, 2011
