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Re: My Home
In your arms Big and strong I find solace Yes in your Masculine embrace Right in the comfort Of your firm chest. It’s your warm touch As you hold me ...
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Re: Wonderful Rain
Hey there, I am Gaga for the rain so I like this poem. But it's not only because I'm naturally enamored with anything that has to do with rain that ...
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Re: My New Poems
Hey there, Thank you very much. These were all written in one day. I was high on inspiration!! Thank you, I will totally continue. much love, Upile.
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Re: My Inspiration
Hey there, Wow this is such a nice poem. Love it!! Bravo!!! xxx Upile xx
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Re: I'm Sorry
Hey there, WOW!! My heart has been broken,crushed, disassembled and then I tried to mend it but its just never been back to normal and in all this I never ...
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Re: So get out
Hey there, Wow this is really deep. Emotions is seeping right through and I am completely gripped. Your strength is so evident and I pray that you keep fighting this. ...
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Re: The shadows
Hey there, This is a very sad poem. Very well-thought out, very well-written. I sympathize with the character and almost driven to tears. Really good stuff. One mistake though: 'Months ...
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Re: speechless
Hey there, Bravo! A very cute poem. xxx Upile xxx
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Re: Bad deed
Hey there, This poem is very cute and very true, people do change and we always reminsce hoping one day we can go back. I can totally relate. Bravo! My ...
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Re: Waiting For Life
Hey there, Bravo!! Very nice, very descriptive, very beautifully written. Keep it up!
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Re: The Joys of Being a Writer
Hey there!! I'm so happy that I'm the first to comment because I am totally in awe with this piece. It is exactly what I feel when I write and ...
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Re: Descendant - Chapter Two
Hey there, Normally I hate to jump in and comment on the second chapter before I've read the first but this was a must. There is a very intriguing story ...
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Re: Rainbow of life
Hey there, One typo and the rest is amazing! As always your poems are simple yet ridiculously cute. Bravo!!!! Keep it up. xxx Upile xx
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Re: Before.
Hey there, A beautiful piece. I think anyone can relate. It's brilliant! Though I'm all full of praise I did notice one or two little errors. Here they are: "You ...
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Re: (NO TITLE YET)
Hello Dream, Thanks for the review, I really loved how you wrote down exactly what you thought and exactly where you found flaw. Thank you. I really like Mexico, I'm ...
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