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Re: Yesterday
Hey there, I am Upile. Time is a beautiful topic, I loved how you expressed it in this poem. Bravo! My favourite lines are: "Today is yesterday’s tomorrow, And today ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: I've Made A Mistake
I've made a mistake a new one, my latest one, one to add to my millions but this one this special one wins the golden trophy and thrushes its flag ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: A poem for Japan
Hello there, I am Upile. And I will be reviewing your poem today. I am very interested by this poem because you have decided to write about something the entire ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: What to write about?
Hello there, My name is Upile and I will be reviewing your poem today. So you're telling me... I have the option to publish anything I want for free?! Whatever ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: I want to die a Rose
I want to die a rose freshly budding from the ground, a summer's day Rosita with petals all colours found, a tall angelic flower of beauty and of lush that ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: The Lollipop Garden
Aline Phiri, the beautiful young Malawian girl recalls how her father exploited her voice and drank himself to a grave. This is the beginning of her story, The Lollipop Garden ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: A Glass For My Father.
hello there, This poem is amazing! It made my eyes teary. Thank you for touching my soul so, R.I.P to your Dad. Beautiful! My favourite lines are: The exact, same ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Sanity vs. Love
hey there, Bravo!!!Keep up the good work!!
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: More Than the World
Hey there, wow I totally love this poem. It's beautiful, love in it's greatest. The sky seems to glitter in a heavenly hue. The world seems much brighter when I'm ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Forbidden Love
hey there, Quick comment. Very dramatic, I like it because this is something one can relate too. People tend to try and drink pain away, cut it away, cry it ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: The Blue-Gum Tree
The tall blue-gum tree covers me with a blanket of lavender as boughs sway in the wind and leaves fall on me I lay there put, under my natural duvet, ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Letter To My Mother
Hey there, Wow!! I am a Mama's girl all the way and I love it when Mothers are praised so and are showed such love. Couldn't imagine a person actually ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: My Home
Hey all, You are truly awesome!! Thanks for the reviews. I totally love how this poem got such good feed-back. @ Cali poetry can remind you of anything, its some ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: My Day Dreams
I can't describe the feeling of when I float away into a misty day dream, A world of my very own And though I sit in math class I might ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: My Home
In your arms Big and strong I find solace Yes in your Masculine embrace Right in the comfort Of your firm chest. It’s your warm touch As you hold me ...
Mar 2, 2011
