UnderTheGun

Thank you! This was originally written as a very short piece for a prose writing workshop that I'm taking at school, and there was a two page limit, so that's ...

Ok so I looked at this and it's 4:25 in the morning, too late for me to give you a good review, so I'll be back tomorrow with something really ...

Soooooooooo super funny, I really enjoyed it, and like the others said, it had a bit of truth to it, I guess that's why it was so funny.

Hey, thanks for taking my advice, I like the changes that you've made, it's a step in the right direction but your writing still needs work. Remember that they call ...

Sorry, for some reason I kept thinking the narrator was a man, my mistake. Still really good though, even better the second time. The writing is a bit weak to ...

Thanks, the very first draft of the first four chapters was just...too premature, so in the revision I tried to draw the romance out more, but since the novel is ...

Wow, I loved this. Keep writing, let us know when you post more. I'm dying to see where things go for Ayden and Green Eyes.