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Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 2)
No you didn't, and I just now noticed my mistakes, and I thank you for that. I always had a low grade in the grammer part of English, and that ...
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Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 2)
(This is the edited version of Chapter Two. The previous comments won't be direct since I changed the words, and a couple new scenes. o:) .:Two:. Annaria looked at the ...
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Re: Unfolding the painful truth
This piece is really well written, and when I started reading it, the poem almost soundedd like a long story that somebody had to tell, yet only shorten it with ...
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Re: The Window
Although i didn't quite grasped the concept of this poem, it has a nice tone and I love how the words are placed whithin this poem. What I like to ...
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Re: Photography: Peeking through the Pink Forest
I happen to love taking photography of nature and animals. And I have to say that that would of been a nice picture (Even thought it already is) If ou ...
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Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
This has to be the best I've ever read. You just have the perfect amount of detail and emotion to keep me reading. Now I'm left with questions, and thats ...
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Re: free reviews all around
Hello, I would love for you to write an review for the first chapter of my book: The book is an Fantasy (I'm a fantasy freak). Thanks! ^^
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Re: Stradegy for writing
This stradegy that I used really helped me with the chapters in my book. Before I started writing anything, I opened a new journal then grabbed a pen. I already ...
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Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 1)
Hope you liked it! One day, I hope that I will finish this book and publish it. :3
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 1)
(This is the edited version of Chapter One. So the previous comments won't be direct since I changed the words. o-o) .:One:. Annaria starred at her hands while she sat ...
Aug 4, 2011
