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Re: Let the bullets fly
I would recomend overlooking this passage, I see some mistakes. She raises the gun to her head , pulls the trigger , and let's the bullets fly . You need ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
Fait
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Writers Block
I like how this explains what many writers will confront some time in their life. it happened to me alot, how I will stare at the computer screenw ith my ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Ready to Review!!!!
Hi there, could you please take a look at Chapter two of my novel please? ^^ I'm a litle skeptical abut that chapter. If you want too you can also ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: One Word Story Ring
play
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
I lived in Germany and went to school there, though never spoke German, only American.
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
7/10 It's kinda cute. c:
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: One Word Story Ring
The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Vines and My Puppy again (And More)
These pictures are so Awesome! O: I love the diting that you did, and the puppy. I can just droll all over that. It's so super cute. I love how ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Photography. Quick Poll.
The second one, definatly. I love how the letters are just bundled up without mkaing a word, and some are upside down. I also say that you can relate to ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Rename The User Above You
Funnylookingpinkblob
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Do your characters talk to you?
I sometimes pretend to be my characters, and what they do during a certain scene. I'll even speak what they say, in differnt voices. o..o it's funny because I will ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Welcome to YWS Rain and Phoenix, I'm new here also yet I already have a hang of this site. :o It's a preety nice site,a nd lots of fantastic stories ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Ugly
The story is intresting, and the one thing that I liked was how the character speaks to you. It's almost if you're interviewing the charater and she just blurts out ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: While Walking Home-
I love taking pictures of Plants and animals, and I think thses pictures are a great start. Also what makes a great picture is to have a great focal point. ...
Aug 5, 2011
