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Re: Surviving Marathon
Sorry, I just started school. Tomorrow for sure I will post. :)
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 3)
I'm working on Chapter four, and I think that it's the best chapter opening I ever done so far. Thank you also, I've been writing since I couls hold a ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Can you review the three chapters I currently have up for my Fantasy Novel? You can choose which ever one you want to actuly review, or just read for the ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: And Then I Hit The Atmosphere
What I like about this picture, is that it gives a bird eye's view of the city, with a hint of mountain tops in the background. And how some of ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: WHEN I'M GONE
Wow, this is really deep and enticing, it really kept me reading on throughout the sotry! I can see how people might feel if their alone, and if people would ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Surviving Marathon
Alyssa Brown- North 3rd street The smell of decaying flesh surrounded me from all directions, sending a slight shiver up my spine. I starred at the man sprawled on the ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Surviving Marathon
Oh, so I guess it won't actuly start until Sham post? Alright then.
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Surviving Marathon
This post was messed up >< I have a better one on the fourth page of this. :D
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Surviving Marathon
I never been in a RP before on YWS. I'll try it. :D (Suvivor) Name: Alyssa Brown Age (10+): 14 Gender: Female Proffesion before apocalypse: Student at a Middle School ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Dream Big
I like the poem, though it was choppy. With every word seperated it was hard to grasp the concept of the poem. I would creat a Stanza for this poem, ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Fall on the Verge of Falling
....I envy your artwork. I love fantasy creatures, and whenever I try to draw them...They end up loking like blobs with wierd heads and legs. Anyways, I always knew that ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 3)
Thanks, this is really just a rough sketch of this chapter, even though it took me two days to finish it. o-O I really need to start reading boks that ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 3)
This chapter was tricky for me, so I would love a cirtique! :D .:Three:. The land stood quiet, under the blanket of darkness that expanded around the whole world. Everybody ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 3)
I posted this at the wrong section. x-x Please go here to read:
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Parodies
I'm sure you can, since song writers do parodies on Youtube about other people, I'm sure you can on YWS. (It also gives a good laugh) :)
Aug 16, 2011
