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Should be 2nd cousin o_O your father/mother is her son/daughter's cousin, and so you are her son/daughter's 2nd cousin

The story is good for a prologue, but there are a few issues both stylistically (is that a word? it would be embarrassing if it wasn't) and grammatically. In the ...

Last tuesday, my high school had a "future day". Naturally, a lot of people interpreted this as an excuse to walk around with tin foil on their heads. So, i ...

This is my first review, so try not to criticize it too much... (lol) In the first paragraph/portion of the story, where Will is figuring out where he is, he ...

your getting a tad bit confused i think, but I'll assume that when you say "I manage to kill everyone else instead", you're speaking for Monki.

Fortunately (This would fit better under unfortunately, but that wouldn't work), you were already dead, so any suicidal tendencies you may have had didn't come true.

Fortunately, the neurons were left disconnected in such a way that it actually improved your intelligence with no ill side effects.

Fortunately, someone hacked your brain so that you would never be sad again.