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Awesome picture! The color scheme is [i]fantastic.[i] I love the way that the sky looks like it could stretch out for miles. Good job. :)

Never Trust A G.P.S. Okay, so here’s how it happened. My friend Lacey and I were supposed to be going to a baby shower. It doesn’t sound too spectacular, does ...

Chapter 3 My palms shook. That was it. I was going to jail. Again. I knew that the police were sure to beat down the door at any minute. Anytime ...

Hey there! First off, I loved it. Your description was beautiful and full of emotion. However, there were a few spots in there where it kid of lost my attention. ...

Hey there! I'd like to say that all in all I liked it. Sometimes it was a little hard to understand what exactly was happening, but that's nothing that some ...

I have to say, this is a very beautiful poem. The emotion that goes with it is almost like heartache. It's very different from the usual view of the stars. ...

That was so funny! I used to have ten cats, and I swear all of them were plotting against me... Good use of words, by the way. Made Fluffy seem ...

I loved it! :) I usually don't like poetry, unless it's somewhat depressing... Anyway! Good job!

(Thanks to those who commented on the first chapter! :smt003 I know that this one's a lot longer... Enjoy!) Chapter 2 I glided back through my window noiselessly, still shaking ...

Awe! I thought it was cute. Definitely good for a children's book. Good job. :)

Chapter 1 Dark. That, irrevocably, was the only possible word to describe me at that time; or, possibly, at any moment up until then. Clearly that was what my parents ...