UCntCMee

Whoa. I'm totally jealous of how good your writing is! That was really good. Keep it up!

Hey! Awesome short story. I really wasn't expecting the ending! It was very short, sweet, and to the point. I think you should make it into a novel, by the ...

Wow. I was not expecting that. No offence, or anything. :) I usually don't read in the romantic short stories section, but the title caught my attention. I loved this! ...

Hey there! I loved this. I thought it had moments of happiness and sadness, and the end even made me "Awe!" out loud! I agree with wewinwelose about the mineral ...

Hey there! I really like this poem. It's seems very heart-felt. I don't know much about poetry, but this one seemed alright to me. Good job! -UCntCMee

Heeeellllllooooooo! Welcome to YWS. :)

Ooooh! Good poem! It's too bad that the stupid computer didn't save what you originally wrote! :( I didn't really find any mistakes, but, then again, I could have skimmed ...

Hi there! Awesome poem. Very imaginative. I have to say that I agree with ilyaeelz. I can't exactly pin point what the meaning of the poem was, but it was ...

Great poem! I could imagine being forced under the water. I have to agree that the lack of correct punctuation was distracting, but simple mistakes = an easy fix! -UCntCMee

Hey there! Great song. I have to agree with hockeyfan87's comments. The grammar is taking away from the song's potential. It's very distracting. But anyway, after you fix those, I ...

Chapter 4 Silence. Eerie, deafening, heart-wrenching silence. That was all that could be heard in the Merryweather home that night. I lay inside my quilt, which could hardly keep the ...

I love this! I like the second version (the spoiler one?). I think it flows more nicely. I think it portrays what goes (or should go) through a writers mind. ...

I like this song! I'm not going to mention the grammar mistakes in details (since it's already been done), but I must say that they take away from the song. ...

I'm liking this story so far! It's very interesting. When I first read 'Dr. Silinstra' I read it as 'Dr. Silantro!' lol. But, anyway, my dyslectic issues aren't important. Love ...

Cool poem! I like how it leaves things to the imagination. Poetry isn't usually my thing, so I don't have many nitpicks. However, I do agree with what the other ...