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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Journal of Zachary Crane

    So, I have to say that I really enjoyed this and I hope that you finish this eventually. :) For some reason, when I saw that his last name was ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: What makes you pick up a book?

    I was torn between the classic option and the author one... Both are true! Usually the books I read are by one of the Bronte sisters, Jane Austen, G.K. Chesterton, ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Lost 'Till You're Found (2)

    Hey there! I liked this piece. The beginning was gripping and I liked how it was longer, but moved fast enough not to be boring. However, I have some nit ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Thrid Story Window

    It was a sunny day, not a cloud in sight and all that jazz. Someone was playing piano inside the plantation, filling the large house with its sweet sound. A ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Haunted Mirrors

    (I'm debating on whether or not to make this into a longer story or leave it as is. If I do make it longer, this will probably be the prologue.) ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Other Re: Sunrise, Sunset, Night

    Hey! I really liked this, somehow. It was definitely cheesy. When I read some of the parts, I couldn't help but laugh. But I still thought it was entertaining. I ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: uuhhhh

    Hey there! This was a pretty gripping storyline. I clicked on it because of it's title. :) I liked it, but I was too caught up in some of the ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Last....

    I really liked this. It can relate to a lot of people, which can be hard to accomplish. The last line was by far my favorite. The only nitpick I ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prologue and first chapter, first novel.

    Hey, there! I have to say that I liked the prologue better, but this was still good. I like that you alluded to something being different from what people would ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My first attempt . Untitled novel to come.

    Wow! That was awesome. No nitpicks from me, either. Keep writing!

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Other Re: Done With Caring

    We used to be friends- best friends, you might even say. So, what happened? What happened to sitting in the creek and talking about useless things? What happened? So you've ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fine, I Wrote a Love Poem.

    I like this. It's a tad short, but it's still good. I know this is hardly a review, but it's all that I have to say. ;) Cool poem. -UCntCMee

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: I See You

    Great song! I really like how you compare the situation to tug of war. It makes the song seem less... negative, I guess, but without losing what the song is ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: So This Is Goodbye

    Hey there. Love the poem. I think its very beautiful and heartfelt. Although I know practically nothing about poetry, in my opinion I think it flowed nicely. However, I found ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New to writing, and the forum.

    Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. :)

    Dec 7, 2010


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