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Re: The Journal of Zachary Crane
So, I have to say that I really enjoyed this and I hope that you finish this eventually. :) For some reason, when I saw that his last name was ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: What makes you pick up a book?
I was torn between the classic option and the author one... Both are true! Usually the books I read are by one of the Bronte sisters, Jane Austen, G.K. Chesterton, ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Lost 'Till You're Found (2)
Hey there! I liked this piece. The beginning was gripping and I liked how it was longer, but moved fast enough not to be boring. However, I have some nit ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The Thrid Story Window
It was a sunny day, not a cloud in sight and all that jazz. Someone was playing piano inside the plantation, filling the large house with its sweet sound. A ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Haunted Mirrors
(I'm debating on whether or not to make this into a longer story or leave it as is. If I do make it longer, this will probably be the prologue.) ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Sunrise, Sunset, Night
Hey! I really liked this, somehow. It was definitely cheesy. When I read some of the parts, I couldn't help but laugh. But I still thought it was entertaining. I ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: uuhhhh
Hey there! This was a pretty gripping storyline. I clicked on it because of it's title. :) I liked it, but I was too caught up in some of the ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Last....
I really liked this. It can relate to a lot of people, which can be hard to accomplish. The last line was by far my favorite. The only nitpick I ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Prologue and first chapter, first novel.
Hey, there! I have to say that I liked the prologue better, but this was still good. I like that you alluded to something being different from what people would ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: My first attempt . Untitled novel to come.
Wow! That was awesome. No nitpicks from me, either. Keep writing!
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Done With Caring
We used to be friends- best friends, you might even say. So, what happened? What happened to sitting in the creek and talking about useless things? What happened? So you've ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Fine, I Wrote a Love Poem.
I like this. It's a tad short, but it's still good. I know this is hardly a review, but it's all that I have to say. ;) Cool poem. -UCntCMee
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: I See You
Great song! I really like how you compare the situation to tug of war. It makes the song seem less... negative, I guess, but without losing what the song is ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: So This Is Goodbye
Hey there. Love the poem. I think its very beautiful and heartfelt. Although I know practically nothing about poetry, in my opinion I think it flowed nicely. However, I found ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: New to writing, and the forum.
Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. :)
Dec 7, 2010
