TylynRae

Heyy, I liked this one! I liked the outfit a lot, and her body is really cute. Her neck is a bit too short, which throws off her face and ...

Will not heal up for years. That line is one of the only ones where I wanted to change something. I don't think the Up is necessary, it disrupts the ...

Hey there again =] I have to agree with Solvey on this one. The start was a tad weak for me, but you went out with a bang. This was ...

Woah now. Now we're getting to the really good stuff =] This was a beautiful poem. I mean... wow. It made my heart sad at the end about the granddaughter ...

This poem was a bit more difficult to critique, free form always is. Anyway, the set up was a bit iffy for me. Free verse needs a really strong layout ...

Twisting, gnawing, boring, drilling Pain- is there something more filling? The rhythm was a tad off here. Love is fleeting, filled with sorrow, Pain is there, pain is tomorrow. Nothing ...

Chapter Eighteen I pushed away, the strain in my arms making me groan. James continued to come at me, his belt whirring as he pulled it off and threw it ...

Yaaay! I love when you write pretties =] Anyway, I thought this was great. Its extremely catchy, and just has that feel to it. We don't have tons of things ...

Haven't posted in a while. I've been too busy. I took this picture a really long time ago. Found it. And edited it. I have no idea what camera I ...

Oooh, these are neat! I think I prefer the bottom one over the top, I know its the same photo, but I thought the editing was really neat. Job well ...

I'm dying to know what program you use for edits o.o. You are a photography GOD.

Oh. This photo made me sad =[ Its a really great photo and when I opened the page I was uber excited to see what you did with your latest ...

Okay. You know the drill. Used the same camera as always the piscio waterproof HD one. Don't ask how I got this angle. Bad things happen at that angle. Anyway! ...

Took this moments ago, as per usual. I'm using the same camera I've been using. I'm not one hundred percent happy with this camera, because it doesn't have the kind ...

This photo is really neat. The only thing I was iffy on were the two flower stalks in front of the two more vibrant ones. You see these two beautifully ...