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TylynRae

  • Art & Photography Re: Digital Shizz

    These are pretty cool =] I really liked the tree monster guy chasing that one guy. I think the first one is definitely a lot better. But the guy running ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Falling Stars

    Hey there! I think you have a nice piece here. Its a bit short, which is totally okay. I had a few iffs with this piece. One was that the ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: If I Thought This Would Happen

    You have a really good idea with this. There are so many times in peoples lives where they really just wish they can take everything back... they wish they can ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Spooky doodles

    I thought these were pretty neat. The proportions on the first one is a bit off, the skull is a bit to long and not as round, but thats not ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: My Caterpillar and more

    Ah, these are lovely. The texture of the caterpillar and the lighting in these pictures is beautiful. Really well done =]

    Aug 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 20

    Chapter Twenty I breathed, taking in shallow breaths, letting them out. My breath echoed. My eyes fluttered open, faces blurred above me. In. Out. In. Out. I breathed. “Is she ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Carry me Home Chapter 19

    Chapter Nineteen “I’m going to miss you like crazy!” Laynie hugged me fiercely, her thin wiry arms squeezing me in a warm embrace. “You’ll see me tomorrow.” I laughed at ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Abstract artwork

    Okay. The first one was neat, but I thought the quality could have been a bit better. Its a pear, a blue pear, but its still a pear and still ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Other Re: If you're talking to the moon

    Ah, I loved this. The way you portrayed the moon, and talked about the tree, it just made sense to me. I loved how you made it seem as everything, ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever

    I hate to be the downer, but I didn't like it too much =[. Your grammar and punctuation didn't have any noticeable errors. And your sentence structure in general was ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Window

    Ah, this is a really nice piece, even for its length. You have enough substance there to let us know whats going on, and at the same time not say ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: always winter wolves

    Heya Perdy =] I only had one big iff on this. And everything else was absolutely stunning. I think. The name Steve. Just sort of threw everything off. It just ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Headlights

    I wrote this story just now and I was thinking about the man that I love. This song has been stuck in my head... it's called Headlights by the classic ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: And Then I Hit The Atmosphere

    Okay. So I took this picture a loooong time ago, not sure what camera I used. But I was in Washington and this was the view from the space needle. ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Man

    Beautiful =] This is fantastic. I love how simple it is, and the way you set it up is phenomenal. No criticism. Which doesn't help at all, haha. But its ...

    Aug 16, 2011


When people are free to do as they please, they usually imitate each other.
— Eric Hoffer