TylynRae

Oh my gosh... I'm really at a loss for words. This piece is so simple, so straight edge, but it really just... I don't know what to say! I picture ...

I like this a lot. I wasn't quite sure what you meant, if your love Was your writing or if it was just another love. Which I don't know if ...

I cannot believe that a thirteen year old wrote this! Its deep and clearly just amazing. If I were to change anything, I'd change the main characters age a little. ...

I wish I was beautiful-- Passionate words rolling from my lips like venom, Cheeks smoothed with blush. A smile plastered to my face, Contorted and wretched. I wish I was ...

I think the concept of the story is great and I really like the part about Elliot. But there are a few aspects that I'm not absolutely sold on. One ...

Tongue pressed to cheek. Lips pursed, eyes stitched shut. Attention focused on facade. Silent. Oblivious. Obvious. Dangerous curves insinuating lust, passion. A serpent in disguise. Lips like morphine

I like this a lot. The style in general is great, its not too wordy or too simplistic. Its wonderful =]