TylynRae

I really love this piece. House of Cards, brilliant title and it's just coming from a different angle. It's been forever since I've read a piece that's abstract and modern ...

Good good good =] You've definitely improved from the other things that I've read. Not that they weren't good, because they were, but you've expanded a lot and there's a ...

Ok. I'm a big horse person. The problem I see with this, sorry if any one else has noticed it, is that the jockey's rarely ever own the horses. The ...

Holy... This is really good =]. I like this piece a lot. It's easy to read and I like the way that you formatted it. It's Nice..... I don't know ...

I like this piece =] It has substance to it and the writing style in general is spectacular. I don't know how to word it... but it gives me this ...

Okays, I really like this piece, but there is only one little thing that I see that bothers me a little. When you explain what life is about for different ...

(Please note that any and all criticism is appreciated. But also know that the plot itself is not up for reconstruction. This story is the truth, and that is what ...

This piece means a lot to me... I just dealt with a similar situation in the past few months. I dated a guy for two and a half years... and ...

... I don't know what to say to this... I read it twice actually, trying to figure out my view, whether I want to be angry or... I don't even ...

I like this a lot. It's truthful and since it's in letter form, it feels right for it to be written the way that it is. So simple and truthful. ...

Okay, I really liked this story first off. It was definitely interesting but I wish it was longer! It leaves you hanging, which is good but it sucks sometimes when ...

I really like the third line, it flows really well into the next line and I just really like how dramatic it makes the whole thing. But it's a really ...

Ok, animekaratepup. Thanks for the review, firstly. And I'll definitely take your advice on this one. I'll have to admit that grammar and punctuation is my weak point. So thank ...

Thank you for pointing out that we can display images on here! I had no idea and now I know that I have a place to feature some of my ...

Seeing that I am a news at this young writers biz... it would be absolutely wonderful if someone filled me in on how to get more readers and such. It ...