TylynRae

I recognize this! =] Sorry I couldn't help more. Fantasy is not my area of expertise. But anyway, I think the person that commented before me had a lot of ...

I didn't know if you meant to spell werewolf wrong or not, but you did, first off. My main thing with this piece is the wording. There is one line ...

I really liked this piece. It flowed nicely for the most part, though there were a few parts where I was just a little iffy. But it was really pretty ...

Hey there =]. I really liked this piece. The style is a bit different for me, since I haven't been reviewing as much as I should be doing. But I ...

Tigersprite: Thanks for the review first of all. =] I'm glad to see the positive reactions. I like some of the suggestions that you made, and other's I wasn't quite ...

This is my short story, Hush, and I would greatly appreciate it if anyone that wants to would review it. Thanks =]

=] Go jewishness! I like your style by the way. It's pretty rad.

@ kirstenailene50878 Thank you so much for your review =] I try as often as I can to get a reaction like yours, and like everyone else that has reviewed ...

Oh goodness! First off, I flipped to this after catching your name in something that I was reading. Snoink. haha. Well anyway, when I first read it I instantly thought ...

I think overall that the idea of this piece is really good and you describe your characters well, giving insight to what is going on. But like MrMustard said... it ...

I thought that the message was good but I just couldn't find a good rhythm with it =\. It felt like you were trying to rhyme but not at the ...

@ animekaratepup, that was exactly what I was going for =] I mean, 'a very sad poem that reads in a fun way' It's a sort of signature thing I ...

Doxie00, the point of the poem was to void out emotions completely and just see what's happening. This is a very different writing style than what I usually use, but ...

His hand coming down, smack smack smack Rattling my teeth clack clack clack My breathing coming harder rush rush rush A knife to my stomach gush gush gush Voices in ...

I don't know what to think of it. I really like the rhythm and the imagery is beautiful. =] You say butt. Ha ha. I don't know whether that's a ...