TylynRae

@ perdido. I messaged you originally because you had given a pretty tough comment to a friend of mine and she didn't know why. I then told her that I ...

Thank you so much xDudettex for reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece. =] I've been requesting reviews because I think that the rating and the topic in general ...

Heyy there =]. Over all this poem is really good. Your word choice is absolutely fantastic. It's refreshing to see that not everyone has a limited vocabulary. I like the ...

Hey there. Here is a link to my new short story titled Sinews. I'd greatly appreciate a review. Thanks =]

WTMeighan! You read it =]. Thank you so much for the review. I absolutely love the feed back that I've been receiving. I'm sitting in class right now absolutely gushing ...

This is a link to my new piece, short story, called Sinews, It would be great if you would review it and if you like it, it would be great ...

With the second one, lol, I'd cut it down a bit, it gets almost too long. But other than that it's good. You're already getting better with detail! =]

:D Thank you SmylinG for the wonderful review. I'm really happy with what people are saying about my work and your review really made my day. I'm just... completely humbled ...

Thanks for reviewing! I don't think too many people will take this story too well because it is very graphic. And I do realize all too well that women cheat ...

to everyone that has reviewed thanks for your response =] @ Formslipper: I'm not looking for true love, this isn't about an exboyfriend that I want back or for any ...

I breathe in. Your scent clings to my pillow. I roll over, my face contorted, tear stained and red. I push my pillow to the floor and ball my blanket ...

This was really great, I'd like to say first. I only saw a few flaws, one being that you over use 'once more' a lot and... I can't remember the ...

This was really great. I had a good idea of what was happening and I like how you kept some things to the imagination, for instance not telling us exactly ...

I liked this piece, the set up made me think of emily dickinson because she too didnt go for the conventional rhyming and then ending of a stanza. It's a ...

Depends on what you were going for. I'd personally use more lines, and more shading, but I also like doing very detailed pieces and I usually prefer acrylic as my ...