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Re: Don't Mistake This Smile
Eh. This was a bit... Im not sure what. When I first read it I was expecting for it to be about a bad relationship, but you totally switched the ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Self Potrait :D
This is really beautiful. The hair is absolutely wonderful. I like the style it's a good mix between realism and impressionism. I tend to go for a look sort of ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Orchard
Individually the pictures are fairly good, the lighting could have been used more effectively but other than that they were descent. But as a whole, the subject matter ranges too ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: My brother (:
This is really gorgeous =] I like the subject matter a lot. A dirt bike on a beach, it's probably the greatest thing ever. I really loved it. You centered ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: The Art Of War
I tried to look at these, but the format is huge, which makes it difficult and will probably turn onlookers away. It would be great if you could edit it ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Finally Back, with Urban Photos.
I liked the first one a lot, just because the background had a good contrast with the people. It was fun to look at. As for the second one and ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Role Play Of The World
Up to the last line, this piece was really good. The material you used and the imagery really caught me and didn't let me go. But then I hit the ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Please don't eat me!
Okay. So this piece did make me laugh and it would be perfect for a children's book =]. It was really cute and for a twelve year old it was ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hey there =] I wrote this short story, titled Sinews, and I haven't had as many reviews on it as I would like. So if you could read it that ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Listen
I liked this poem a lot. Mainly because I really liked the wording and the subject in general. Whenever I need metaphors I go for music like things =]. But ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Every Time
I think that the overall idea of this piece was good, but it just didn't have good flow for me. It was choppy, I didn't know if you were going ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Hush
Thank you kimkim and I would like to point out to perdidooooo, this lovely comment that you left me. =] Thank you!
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Sinews
Calm down, Perdido. I understand that it was all good natured, and I was harsh back, like I said I was. My ego is NOT large, but you did make ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Hush
About that... it started out fiction, but then i completely restarted and I have no idea which category it should be under... By the way, now that I know what ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Hush
@ Perdido, again. This wasn't a story. This was a letter I wrote to my dad. You seem to just be totally ripping on people today, huh? But I will ...
Apr 18, 2011
