TylynRae

Hey there. These are really neat. I've yet to see anything like this on Yws! You had a really good technique. My one critique is when you do post art, ...

After deciphering the meaning of Deus Ex Machina, I read the poem and attempted to interpret it in some way. all of it seemed to make sense to me except ...

Hey there =] I found this and thought I'd give you a review. So, the first stanza starts of really strong. You've improved so much since you first started working ...

Hello there =] What I found really interesting about this piece is that just yesterday I watched this show called Circus, (actually I watched numerous hours of it =]) But ...

I really liked the idea of this poem. I would have portrayed it slightly different. The rhythm seemed to be a bit off. The first two lines hinted that it ...

I do believe this is one of the reasons I started following you in the first place. You have such cryptic stanzas that could leave readers guessing and interpreting for ...

I would really appreciate reviews on this. I need to have a rough draft due by tomorrow, and I know it needs a lot of work. Reviews about tenses, grammar ...

This is for my Comp Class. Its a memoir, as I said above, and I would really appreciate critique on it. We were supposed to right a changing point in ...

This was crazy. Sort of the ultimate mind testness. I dunno why, it just seemed really trippy to me lol. But this was really neat, I loved how you described ...

I think this was my very first piece of poetry where not having that short poetic structure really made the piece. I mean, there is structure, rhyme and reason, but ...

I loved this. A lot. I especially like the part where you're talking about a girl spilling out her thoughts and being able to talk all day, but really never ...

Bahaha, this is so cool. I really like the wings in this one. Verry realistic now =] I'm glad that this turned out nice. You're shading is superb and the ...

Heyy there =]. I reaaally liked the ideas with these. The only thing I have to comment on, which a lot of people don't realize sometimes, is that the wings ...

Hello there=] The photos are a tad pixily, but maybe thats just from resizing them? Anyway, I'll have to agree with the other reviewers on this one. I think placement ...

I reaaaaally love how you gave the dragon on the right a very lionistic appearance. Its really beautiful. THe proportions and scalings are really well done as well. The background ...