TylynRae

I just had a few nit picks here and there. With one of the lines the MC is talking to herself. And she outrightly says that her sister committed suicide. ...

They're capitalized for a reason. I combine two sentences with the capitalized words. And as for what is falling. Its the beams =]. A lot of people aren't understanding this ...

Thank you mellophone7. I'm glad you haven't seen one written like this before =]. Its just sort of something I was experimenting with. It is a strange way to write, ...

Thanks for the review =]

Ok, to both people that have reviews. The end words of one sentences open up for the next sentence. For instance, far to much to Bear with me. its actually ...

(This poem was something I wrote while thinking about someone very close to me. I didn't concentrate on punctuation at all, so please heavily critique that. As for the capitalization, ...

@ Butterfinger, your review thrilled me =] It made my day and I'm happy that you enjoyed it and understood it the way I had meant it to be. your ...

III liked it =] It was cute and sort of reminded me of On The Brightside by never shout never! It was coot =]

Um. This is an interesting piece to say in the least. I don't know how to critique it to be honest... it's just... odd lol. But it's all good =]

This piece really caught my attention and held me there. It has such a strange feel to it and its probably one of the most unique pieces I've read in ...

Rascalover, thank you! That is exactly what I've been looking for. I'm absolutely awful with punctuation, so thank you so much for that =] I'll get on it as soon ...

I agree with Grif, I liked the title a lot and the material was good, but its not cut out to be a 'love' poem, which I think is a ...

I liked all of these except for the second one. The randomness in the corner draws away from the center in the photo. But other than that it was descent. ...

I agree with the pup, the spacing is strange. I'm not quite sure on the flow but then again I have no idea how it sounds. I do wish they ...

Um. This was fairly explicit. So I'm glad that you put the rating on it that you did. I'm not sure what I think. It made me think of clowns... ...