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  • Other Poetry Re: Bloody Tears

    I had a few qualms with this. Firstly, the picture was a bit of a distraction, and took away the emphasis on the poem. Secondly, I'm not a fan of ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Ode To A Woman

    It saddens me that this has had 22 views and has yet to be commented on once! I really love this poem and I think it's definitely going to make ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You were wrong

    I like this poem and it proves that not all poems have to be ridiculously long in order to get a message across. However, the ending of this poem turned ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sincerely, Brain

    Ohmigee! I loved this, very very much. It was flawless and I've recently experienced something to this degree where I was just really angry at myself. But thank you so ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Because I'm a Christian

    Hello there =] I liked the message of this poem, and here recently I've had a lot of religious disputes with someone. I myself, am questioning whether I'm a Christian ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love Lost

    I'm not sure how I feel about this. You have everything you need to make a story. Characters, background, plot, problem and so forth, which is great. I'm just not ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hymn of a paladin

    Overall this poem is good. It's usually not a subject matter that I read, but I think it was descent enough. Your flow is really good though I'd use a ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: They say

    This poem had really good flow at the beginning but sort of fell apart a little in the second to last stanza. I think overall the feel is really good ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Dear, YWS

    You're featured now =]]

    Apr 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hush

    I didn't do too much reviewing before I had written that piece. I was new to YWS then and its only been two weeks or so now since I first ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Facing East

    The color compliments are really nice on here. I saw that a previous reviewer said that the picture was too small, but now its too big lol. You want to ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Deity

    This one is really gorgeous. The texture and lines on her dress is really nice and her face in general. Of the pieces that I've looked at so far, this ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Cry

    My only problem with this one is that the head is a little too big, the forehead. I realize most manga and anime style things do that, but this one ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Boy 1

    I don't see anything wrong with this. I really really like the eyes and the expression in general is good. If anything I'd say it was a little tooooo simple. ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Classy's Art Dump

    Like one of the first reviewers said, its nice to see a villain that actually looks like a villain =] I liked this a lot. Keep it up.

    Apr 21, 2011


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening