TylynRae

Hey there =]. So, I liked these. A lot. Its not very often that I give nice comments on photography, since very rarely is it something that's close enough to ...

Hello there =]. I thought since I had requested a review from you just a few moments ago, that I should definitely review some of your material as well =]. ...

Hey there =]. I was wondering if you would mind reviewing one of my short stories? It's titled Breathe. I would very much appreciate it =]]

Thanks Butterfinger! I thought that I was right, I looked it up twice. Ha ha =] Thank you!

@ GryphonFledglin, I totally get where you're coming from with the ellipses. I will admit that I'm absolutely awful at using them, along with punctuation in general. Ha ha =] ...

I remember that first time you left me. I sat out on the baking concrete, blisters on my palms. Gravel engraved love into my legs. I didn’t move. I dug ...

Heyy there =]. So, I saw this in the new thingy category. And was like. What!?!? So I opened it and I sort of got hooked immediately. First off, THANK ...

I shall read this when you spell memorys* correctly. =] I would have read this, because it seems as if you've had a few good reviews. I'm not fantastic at ...

Brilliant coloring I would like to say, first. Secondly, when posting art and such, it would be really great if you posted what media you used =]. A lot of ...

Oooh, very dark. I love it. I think that this piece was overall descent but probably would have made a much nicer short story. It was too short of a ...

heyy there =]. This honestly made me want to cry. Like a lot. And I think I only found one grammatical error. You said sneaked somewhere and it should have ...

It it weren't for the title I would have totally skipped over this. But rad sauce =]. I loved the overall gist, but the execution was a tad sloppy. I'd ...

chooses- choices. I didn't get finished reading this, because I became too distracted by everything, the color, the word choices and such. But yeah, before you post, reread things and ...

I really liked this. With most poetry I have to comment about the flow of the poem. But in this case it was fairly descent. I love how stuck up ...

Edits. Thouch, should be touch I think. And you say that you can have or two parents. One or two if I'm correct. Sorry I sort of just bashed those ...