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Re: The Morning Cha Cha
Hullo there. I've noticed with a lot of your poetry its very very short, and usually has something to do with regular day life, which can definitely be a good ...
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Re: Easy Come, Easy Go
Oh my god. I read one of your poems, and decided to read more of your stuff. And with that, I have become hooked. There is no doubt in my ...
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Re: A Place Called Elysian Fields
This has to be one of the most brilliant poems I've read in a long time. The emotion you caught in this... was just... awe inspiring? I think you shed ...
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Re: Lilies
I would have to agree with both previous reviewers, Rooh found some mistakes that need to be fixed, to make it flow better and not distract the reader. A lovely ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: White Blood Cells
This made me laugh, we learned about this stuff not too long ago =]. But anyway, it flowed nicely and I think most of your information is correct. I'm a ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Like Fire
I can totally relate to this piece! The piece was short, and to the point, with no fluff. I enjoyed it however short it may have been =]
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Testing
Well then. Um. I'm not sure what to say to this. But I agree with the previous reviewer. Anticipation has begun.
May 21, 2011 -
Re: A War in my Wardrobe
Ah! I can totally see this in a mag of sorts, a sweet little poem with a picture of this girl with her hair in shambles and an 'urg my ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Loom of Love
So just recently I attended a play based on the Princess Bride, and this sort of reminded me of it a lot. How the princess waited and waited for Westley ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Boredom
Oh the irony of it all! I was just feeling this way right before I read this. What a pick me up =] This made me laugh. A lot. Cute ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: The Other Side of Happiness
Woah. Ha ha =] Very ominous beginning. Hope to read more into the plot and all once you have a bit more posted =]
May 21, 2011 -
Re: She Was Blind
Solvey! Hey there =]]. This was absolutely lovely! I saw one instance however that made me wrinkle my nose. This entire piece is romantic and beautiful and very sophisticated. Which ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: First kiss
Hello there =]. Here to review a bit. The title had me a little shaky, since romancey things are usually not my thing. But anyway! I found a few grammatical ...
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Re: Eclipses
Oh goodness. The title caught me a day or so ago, but internet was too stupid for me to open the topic and read it. But anyway, the imagery in ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
This was positively epic =]. If only all schools put these kinds of assignments to work. Learning would be modern and easy to relate to. =] This was well played ...
May 21, 2011
