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TylynRae

  • Other Poetry Re: The Morning Cha Cha

    Hullo there. I've noticed with a lot of your poetry its very very short, and usually has something to do with regular day life, which can definitely be a good ...

    May 21, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Easy Come, Easy Go

    Oh my god. I read one of your poems, and decided to read more of your stuff. And with that, I have become hooked. There is no doubt in my ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Place Called Elysian Fields

    This has to be one of the most brilliant poems I've read in a long time. The emotion you caught in this... was just... awe inspiring? I think you shed ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Lilies

    I would have to agree with both previous reviewers, Rooh found some mistakes that need to be fixed, to make it flow better and not distract the reader. A lovely ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: White Blood Cells

    This made me laugh, we learned about this stuff not too long ago =]. But anyway, it flowed nicely and I think most of your information is correct. I'm a ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Like Fire

    I can totally relate to this piece! The piece was short, and to the point, with no fluff. I enjoyed it however short it may have been =]

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Testing

    Well then. Um. I'm not sure what to say to this. But I agree with the previous reviewer. Anticipation has begun.

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A War in my Wardrobe

    Ah! I can totally see this in a mag of sorts, a sweet little poem with a picture of this girl with her hair in shambles and an 'urg my ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Loom of Love

    So just recently I attended a play based on the Princess Bride, and this sort of reminded me of it a lot. How the princess waited and waited for Westley ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Boredom

    Oh the irony of it all! I was just feeling this way right before I read this. What a pick me up =] This made me laugh. A lot. Cute ...

    May 21, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Other Side of Happiness

    Woah. Ha ha =] Very ominous beginning. Hope to read more into the plot and all once you have a bit more posted =]

    May 21, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: She Was Blind

    Solvey! Hey there =]]. This was absolutely lovely! I saw one instance however that made me wrinkle my nose. This entire piece is romantic and beautiful and very sophisticated. Which ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: First kiss

    Hello there =]. Here to review a bit. The title had me a little shaky, since romancey things are usually not my thing. But anyway! I found a few grammatical ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Eclipses

    Oh goodness. The title caught me a day or so ago, but internet was too stupid for me to open the topic and read it. But anyway, the imagery in ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Other Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    This was positively epic =]. If only all schools put these kinds of assignments to work. Learning would be modern and easy to relate to. =] This was well played ...

    May 21, 2011


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