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Re: Lesson in Breaking
Holy crypt man! This was absolutely amazing... The flow was brilliant and I love how you ended it with sort of the way you began. This was moving and made ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Bits and pieces
Hey Carbon =] You were the first on my creeping list, so here I am! Creeping! So anyway, I really liked Bog and How The Pen Fell, they had totally ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Brokenhearted
I liked this a lot. =] It was short and to the point. Another reason I really liked this piece is because I could relate to it a lot... my ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Hi My Name Is
Pretty descent poem here. The last stanza, you say O, instead of Oh, probably a little bit of a texting mix up, haha. But this is a very interesting poem, ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: "El Morro" San Juan, Puerto Rico
The third and fifth photos are the ones that I liked the best out of the bunch. The first one just didn't have much substance, and the others would have ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: My sister's art
You're YOUNGER sister painted these? Oh goodness. If you're fourteen she's a prodigy! ha ha =] These were quite beautiful. I personally liked the Panda a lot. I'm really impressed ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: How to; Beach addition ;D
This is a really good tutorial I would like to say =] I really liked the subject matter in general and you explained it in a way thats easy to ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Pictures
Wowzers =]. Your photography has that independent movie style to it. Not perfect and precise, but rough and edgy. I don't have many qualms about them. The only thing I ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: When Thirteen Died
One quick critique so I dont forgot! Murders should be murderers. Ah, now that thats done. I would like to say that I really like this poem. I've studied up ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: 17 to 1
This was a nice piece, easy to relate to for a lot of people, including myself. The overall message was good, it was pretty smooth. I think you had a ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Tuesday [Supernatural cover of Rebecca Black]
Oh my god oh my god oh my god!!!! GAH! So when I first read this I was asking myself whether I've seen this episode or not and then I ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Honey Sweet
Your story is about a composer in a tree house kissing in dreams. (Short story generator idea I chose for contest) His knees shook as he placed a timid foot ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: First Attempt
This wasn't bad for a first attempt! The proportions don't seem to be too bad, but I think you're right, to get the anime feel you might have to lengthen ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Two Koi
This poem was descent. Short and cut straight to the point but with beautiful symbolism. I would however, change the arrangement. Centering is never nice. =[ I used to do ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: You, Him, and I (I Don't Belong)
Hello there =]. First I would like to say that this was a nice read, flowed pretty well, though other spots were a bit patchy. But overall a very nice, ...
May 21, 2011
