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TylynRae

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Flutter By

    @anonymousanarchist, thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoy it =]]]

    May 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Flowery hair!

    Hello there =]. Okay, I'll go in order from the top. The first one, though I like, I think you should crop down a little bit, a little off the ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Honey Sweet

    @ Dudette, you're a life saver! You have no idea how much you helped me =] Thanks again!

    May 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Beautiful Flame

    Woahs. This surprised me a bit! Very steamy stuff you have here! So anyway, I think overall this was pretty good. It would be nice if you elaborated a bit ...

    May 22, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The gay guy in the bar

    Hi there. I have to agree with you on the stereotypical issue, but I agree with the previous reviewer. You should definitely rate your stuff. Twelve year olds could click ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Glitter

    You're stories are huge, but so worth the read. Each one of them is just... god. I feel like I'm right there next to them, and though I know absolutely ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Digital Lineart Coloring.

    Wow. This is really pretty. And at the same time its not. It's empowering and makes women look less like damsels and more like heroes, which I totally love =]. ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: from the wise

    Hey Persy! Okay, so I really REALLY liked this poem. It was a little bit difficult to understand at first, but if all poems were easy to understand no one ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: For You To See Me

    Hello there. Well firstly, I liked the poem overall. It was easy to understand and relate to. But one of the bigger nitpicks I have with it, is that it ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Fatal Wound

    Hey there =] For a first attempt, this was pretty good and I think Kitty caught you on most of the mistakes that I found. The capitalization thing is a ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Sixteen Miles

    Ah, I liked this a lot. It reminds me of a lot of personal things... like. A lot. But anyway, I'm glad that you can't do short poetry, you have ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: More manga!

    Heyy there =], this is good. Definitely for someone of your age =]. The eyes are cute. If you want to make the perrrfect manga, you should look at different ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Self Portrait

    Heyy there =]. I totally love this! I don't see much of anything wrong with it, but then again it would be great if you posted an actual picture so ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: About the best I could EVER do.

    Holy Crypt Isha! These were awesome. I like Muffy a lot =] It's a pretty tree. I dont have anything negative to say about any of them. The color and ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Record

    I looked through your other photos, but when I found this one, I knew it was the one I really NEEDED to review. This photo is perfect. Everything about it ...

    May 22, 2011


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19