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Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 1
Carry Me Home To Lyn-z and Jaecob, Because I cannot express my love to either of you any other way Prologue He wasn’t supposed to be here. My legs pressed ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Dear Nate,
Bahaha =] This was lovely. Poor Nate, he Is pretty rad.
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Private Moment
WT! I missed you so vera much! And FINALLY, I've very much craved your writing ever since God The Dealer, but anyway. =] I loved it. You have such a ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Jakil
Hey Butter! I finally got internet, so now I'm back! =] Anyway, here as requested. I really loved this piece, I only saw a few little things here and there, ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Beneath the Surface
Gah, I do love reading your work =] There's always so much going on, so much to interpret and feel. This poem in particular has a lot of emotion. I ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi?
Leigh, if you call yourself a writer, then you should write something that you write, as a writer, and then post it on this site for people to critique you ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Mona Megan
Wow, is about all I have to say. I personally, can't draw to save my life. I'm more of a, draw the basic shape and then paint it awesome, sort ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Pastel Art
Hello there =]. First off, THANK YOU, for saying what media you used, that helped with a looot of things. Now on to the actual review. So, the first one, ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Bluejay Painting
Ooh, pretty. I think this is lovely =] Lovely shading and your proportions seem to be right on. I like the background, even if it is a little brighter. Overall ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Just Breathe
Ooh, I liked this. Descent emotional depth, great use of vocabulary. I would change the set up just a weensy bit, it's a little bit to choppy and makes th ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Who Wasn't There
Hello there =]. I think the beginning of this poem was really good. Everything up to the last two stanzas was strong with a really good rhythm. It kept me ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: All About Me
Hello there =]. I will have to be honest, and say that this isn't my favorite. Not that it wasn't good, I just wasn't feeling it. The rhythm jumped a ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Little Lucifer
This was wonderful. I could totally relate to this, which is what makes poetry good, when someone can relate I mean. But anyway, I don't think I saw any mistakes, ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Los photographias
These, are three photos I took of myself, being a noob, while waiting to attend a graduation ceremony that I helped host. I'm not sure why I'm posting these. But ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Even in Rain
this is so cute! I absolutely love the pika suit =]]] Its a nice touch and I think you're proportions are right on. I like the hand reaching out, its ...
May 23, 2011
