TylynRae

Good golly gosh Vit! I have nothing bad to say about any of these. The angles and subject matter are brilliant, the coloring and editing are fantastic. If you Aren't ...

Hello =]. There are only a few things I would change with this. and those would be the length of the girls nose and the eyes on the boy. The ...

Woah! This is really cool. I like the subject matter a lot. The softness of the mask and the fierceness of the dragon are really nice. I'd smooth out your ...

I didn't understand for a minute, why you spaced the lines out. And then I thought I got it, but then I was like... well. This is a song, so ...

Hey there! I'm going to make this quick because I only found a few errors. The freeform was really good. Firstly, in the first poem you said pedals/ petals twice, ...

Ah, this was really cute. The rhythm in the first few stanzas and in the last couple are really good though you seemed to have lost it a bit in ...

Hey there. I saw this on that one hundred topics that haven't been reviewed thing and this one popped out at me. I usually don't get into these kinds of ...

This was really cute. and the subject material was unique, making it more appealing to readers. Nice descriptions too! The stanzas and the rhythm were nice as well. Nice job ...

Hey there =] I really liked this one, the coloring of the eye was really good. The one thing I would change is the thickness of the girls neck, the ...

Hello there =] I think the effect you put on the background was really nice, but I think I would have changed the angle a bit, maybe gotten closer and ...

Gah, you're too good at this Vit! I think its lovely. The coloring and the light is just perfect. Another thumbs up from me =]

I liked this a lot. I think the word choice could have been a bit better, a bit more sophisticated, but overall it was good, most of the time it ...

The second to last stanza was by far the best one, but your rhythm was a bit off and the stanzas were so different and varying that there really aws ...

Great poem, but what I didn't understand is Why exactly you capitalized every word. I get it if you're trying to add emphasis, though thats not the 'correct' way to ...

Oh, how I miss haikus. This was really good. And it was really melancholy feeling. Poor bird =\ Well done!