TylynRae

Hello there =] I found this in the list that didn't have reviews yet, so I decided that I"m going to start through the list and get as many of ...

Hello there =]. I think its just me... maybe, but in the first few lines I didn't find much of a rhythm. I think thats partly because you didn't separate ...

Hey there =]. Okay, so I think you have great rhythm, I even clapped it out slow and I think I only found one teensy part that didnt flow perfectly ...

Heyy there =]. I really liked this poem and the way you laid it out was interesting. The rhythm was pretty good, but there were a few parts that were ...

Gah! I totally loved this! It's not what you see in poetry today. And it just has so much TRUTH in it thats its just mind boggling good! And you'd ...

Okay. I only have one little nitpick that I have to say quickly before I forget. Third stanza, last line. I think you need one more syllable to make it ...

Hey there! I had no idea you could even do this kind of stuff! Its really neat =] The one thing I see that I would change is the way ...

Ah! Finally! I never thought I'd ever meet another person in the world that loves Love Actually as much as I do! It's a brilliant movie thats just... it puts ...

@snickerdooly, haha, I wrote this without even thinking about format, it just sort of flowed out I guess and I didn't think about the format, so I'll definitely fix that! ...

I really liked this one. The part about the fragility of butterfly wings was really nice. I could really see that image in my head. The imagery was really good ...

Hello there =] The color is a bit overpowering in this one, and the lines could be a little bit smoother. Other than that you have a nice piece here ...

Very nicely done. I never would have seen this from that song! It was a clever way to look at it, without romance and all. Very nicely done =] You ...

This is really good. I didn't find anything particularly wrong with it. Nice job =]

Hello there. These are really good! The only thing I would change, is that I'd darken them. You don't have very much range with the shades, and if you were ...

Woah! These are really cool. I like the duck ones a lot, I'm not sure why. But they remind me of something you'd find on an album cover: random but ...