TylynRae

All done jasminebells! Lovely story by the way =]

Heyo! Here to review as requested =]. I only saw a few grammatical errors. One being in the first paragraph I think. You were talking about a woman with red ...

Hello again! These are really nice. Both of them have a lot going on in all quadrants and the editing is fantastic. I didn't find anything negative with either of ...

So I've decided to open up a Review For Food topic so then I can find new works to review! Exciting right?! Anyway, I'm willing to review just about anything, ...

Hey there =]. This is really good! I don't see any mechanical problems with it, and the proportions are great. Maybe just a touch of shading though. Other than that ...

I really liked where you were going with this, I just wish it was portrayed a bit differently. This would make an AMAZING short story. Like I can see exactly ...

These are gorgeous. The shading is really well done. Especially with the eyes on the second one. =] The only flaw that I was was with the chin of the ...

Gah! These are lovely. I really like the middle on and I don't think you went too crazy on her hair. It's gorgeous! And as for the last one, I ...

Woah! This is really good. The only ifs I have are with the mans pants and shoes. The um... manly area is a bit funny, haha. And the shoes could ...

IIIII get it! Thanks for the recap =] It helped me tremendously in understanding what exactly you were going with it. Now you have both of my thumbs! (thumbs up ...

Okay guys! There's this really cool group called I'm Wiccan and proud of it! And there are like... three members. Which is really depressing. So I'm writing this to hopefully ...

Chapter Two We turned the corner into Laynie’s driveway and my mouth dropped open. Her driveway was full of cars, none of which I could really see since it had ...

This was quite lovely. Even if it was framed after a children's rhyme, it was still really good. Nicely done =]

Hello there =]. These look pretty cool. But they're a bit pixely if you ask me. I don't know if that was an effect you used..? Also, the bigger thing ...

Hey there =] You lost the rhythm for a few beats somewhere in the middle and got it back for a tick before you went off again. I think the ...